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Team Vheissu pic 1/3

Stellar is back. The first of part of 3 for the team is done.

Awhile ago I was talking with :iconburnettekd: about an alternate appearance for Stel to use now and then so I came up with the Shooting Star look for him, looks a bit darker but you get a similar feel. ^^

Hope everyone likes how it came out, more pics on the way soon. ^^


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Stellar Jay- :iconburnettekd:

EDIT: Oshi... Yes I just realized I said allbowdown08 in the bottom corner, I knew people on the west of the US were behind but sheesh. D=

Critiques


:iconsonicadvance:
Really good job on this one dude !

You did a great work on the pose, the length of the arms, the legs, the thickness and proportions, everything appears very well done to me! I especially like how you made the character´s head, the featherd hairstyle and the beak look really cool! I just think the finger on his left hand turned out a bit too curved. A matter of taste? Hm.. a bit more straight and it´d look perfect! The finger is one of the first things people look at when they view the art, so it should be " perfect " ;P
Also I like the outfit, I don´t really can remember the original, older one right now, but I seriously like the glowy stars on the gloves and on the shoes. They bring some light in the dark coloured character, I really like this. Also I just love it when a character posses some kind of eyecatcher. Like an glowy earring or stuff, anything which gives the figure something remarkable :heart:
Still, the right leg appears a bit long to me for some reason, maybe because the left leg covers it a lot. But it seems allright though (anatomy etc.).

But not just the character is fantastic, the background is great as well! I just love wallpapers and this design turned out very well! The blue sky background with the stars suit the dark/light blue character great! But something like a real shooting star, which goes through a whole corner of the pic or just a part, would have filled it a bit more. Or, since it´s the night sky, simply the moon! There´re a lot of moon brushes on DeviantArt and on other sides, something might have suiten ( suiten? Suited? Argh damn grammar D: ) the background perfectly :heart:

Need to see this when I´m at my own PC again, because this one ( ha, I´m writing you from work ^^;) always put some weird pattern all over the screen... however, nice work though!


Oh my, I guess this is my shortest critique ever, still I hope it was ok ;D

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:icondragonquesthero:
NIce job. Love the cloring Job and how you did the Background.

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:O

That's awesome. o.o
:iconarthurroyalknight:
Oh yes, yes! I knew this piccu was gonna so freaking awesome. :nod: 8-)

So yea, excellent work mate, I loved the outcome! :+fav: :w00t:

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:iconinzanesonikku:
owo zomg..

awesome...

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:iconaurauserof5elements:
this is awesome :) nice job^^

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:iconshaynke:
Looks absolutely amazing. The shading is wonderful, especially with the light source chosen. :3 Also, the glow, the pose, and the bottom of the shoe: awesome.

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:iconmieziii:
Very Nice :D

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:iconangelthecatgirl:
Awesome. I love the lighting especially, it looks great.
:iconfargus:
That's a definate level-up :)
With lots of experience points bonus :)
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He points up but what is up there? I ASK YOU!

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